Fantasy Author asking for some feedback

topic posted Wed, August 8, 2007 - 3:53 AM by  Mark
Hi everyone,

I’m very happy to say that I’ve just had my debut novel published and would love to swap thoughts and opinions on what makes a compelling read. Obviously, some of my motivation is market research, but if I don't ask people who are interested in books who can I ask! With this in mind, what do you think attracts a potential reader? Would it be the front cover like mine below or is it more likely to be on the strength of the synopsis? Just how important is the cover art and what really determines our decision to invest the time to actually sit down and read a book? As a new author, I feel these questions are very important, so any insights you can give will be greatly appreciated. It may help me not to make the same mistakes if I ever get around to writing another one! :)

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Mark
United Kingdom
  • Re: Fantasy Author asking for some feedback

    Sun, August 12, 2007 - 12:55 PM
    While an interesting title and/or cover might cause me to pick up a book, it's probably the synopsis that makes the difference as to whether I'll actually decide to read it.
    • Re: Fantasy Author asking for some feedback

      Sun, August 12, 2007 - 2:04 PM
      Hi Jen,

      I completely agree with you. I've been thinking that myself. If you get a chance to check out my synopsis I would appreciate hearing your opinion on it.
      • Re: Fantasy Author asking for some feedback

        Mon, August 13, 2007 - 10:51 PM
        I think this synopsis says way too much. Rather than letting the reader discover for themselves the deeper meanings embedded in the story, it lays it all out for them. Don't sell your readers short. If you've done your job correctly they will get the bigger themes on their own.

        I'd recommend cutting out the last four lines:

        "The boys walk a dark road of treachery and pain, love and lust, sacrifice and redemption. Friendship and loyalty are put to the test and corruption comes in many guises. Finally, truth can only be revealed through pain and forfeit. It is a journey into the heart of darkness where nothing and no-one are what they seem and the rules are the logic of a dream."


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